Middle Grade, Young Adult, Confused Gen Xer

09 May

Yesterday was a big day for me. I completed all the edits on my Untitled Steampunk (yes, I know) and considered it ready to shop to agents. It’s been about a year since I last shopped out my Blood of a Godkiller manuscript to agents and I’m ready to get back to actively trying to sell a book. The elation, the pride, the self-satisfaction. I had a solid, worthy manuscript on hand.

For about 10 minutes.

Some little brain worm burrowed itself into my grey matter within moments of giving myself an internalized huzzah. The completed manuscript is 43,504 words. Prior to really getting involved in writing this story, I reread some of the books I read growing up. I needed a little experiential instruction on the YA format, so I read these familiar stories with a different eye. I looked more closely at character development, pacing, and content. I even looked at word counts. I felt confident. So where had this insatiable brainworm come from and why was it siphoning off this newfound confidence with such gusto?

Careful dissection of the nefarious beast revealed two things. First, is this manuscript intended to be YA (Young Adult) or MG (Middle Grade)? Second, does the admittedly sparse word count greatly affect which category this manuscript can be considered for? See, I’m not overly familiar with the MG classification as I had intended this story to fall into YA. Now that I wasn’t so certain, I had to do a little research.

According to Colleen Lindsay at the swivet, my manuscript falls just shy of expectations at the lowest end of YA (45k) and just over the highest end for MG (40k). Okay, that isn’t entirely disconcerting. It is acceptable to have some variation, I’m sure.
Well, then I read at that  YA generally starts around 55k words. Even so, they still classify MG as topping out around 40k, so there must be some shady grey area where anything between the two resides.

Naturally word count is hardly the defining factor in classifying a book. The writer at The Mixed-Up Files and Michelle Schusterman at YA Highway take a closer look at content as the dividing factor. Subject matter, naturally tops the list. The overarching theme in my Untitled Steampunk manuscript is self-discovery which, in both cases, seems to best fit into the MG category. However, being an American Steampunk tale, there are issues of ethnicity, class, and politics that are largely linked to the Civil War and Reconstruction. Someone dies. So, unfortunately, I fear that this particular designation is a bit murky as well.
Romance is quite disparate in MG and YA. In MG it would typically involve hand-holding and maybe a first kiss. In YA it can go so far as intercourse and could potentially deal with such subjects as rape and abandonment. Well, I’m not much for romance as a reader or, really, as a writer. Even so, I did include an unspoken adoration between two of the three protagonists. As it is neither central to the theme nor important to the story, it never progresses beyond furtive glances, lingering touches, and the like. So, does this mean it falls squarely within MG?

Finally, and most easily adjusted to suit my needs, is intended readership. While an 8 year-old would not be put off reading about a 13 year-old, it might be less likely that a 13 year-old would read about an 8 year-old protagonist. At present, my protagonists are 11, 11, and 12. Technically, that would place the book into the MG category. If I (or an agent or publisher) felt more keenly that the book should fall into the YA category, I could probably push the characters into the 13 and 14 range, but not much further. I wrote them to be independent and worldly and they are self-sufficient with little interaction with their parents. If I push the 1878 setting to 1880, I may have to change some of the historically accurate names and realign the timeline in reference to events, but I don’t think the characters would be forced to change much. It had always been my intention to give them more responsibility, freedom, and capability than might be expected of children.

So, yeah. I am somewhat deflated in comparison to my brief joy at having completed edits because it seems more work may need to be done. “More work” could include adding another 30-40k words if I decide the manuscript does not easily fit into the YA category.

I think I’ll go ahead and put together a query letter and let the responses I receive determine how much more work I may need to put into it, if any.


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3 responses to “Middle Grade, Young Adult, Confused Gen Xer

  1. Caitlin Ricci

    May 9, 2012 at 11:47 PM

    Hey! Your sister in law sent me over here to say hi to you and hon, you don’t have to compromise. You can do YA easily with the WC you have. And why are you so set on an agent? Silver Publishing (who I’m published with) (yay SP!) *mini cheer!* is opening up a YA site either next month or the month after (i forget which). They’re looking for fantasy, romance, coming of age and a slew of others to start out their Silver Stream line of titles. All the info is on their FB page but you can also email me and I’ll send you all of the requirements and stuff to go over and see if you like any of it. It’s something to consider at least. And they’re made up of some seriously awesome people. And! Their royalties are some of the highest in the e-book industry. And! In general anything over I think 45k automatically goes into print (at least on the SP main site) AND! They were named best e-book publisher for 2011. Something like that. Here’s their website And you can always talk to me if you want more info. And if you want to see an example of the insanely awesome cover art that they make I just put my cover up on my blog. Hugs!

    • tobiaswrites

      May 11, 2012 at 8:09 PM

      To be honest, I’m shooting for traditional publishing over epublishing simply because it’s what I’ve always wanted. I have a lot of respect for authors that self publish, publish through epublishers, even use vanity publishers. For me, I’d like to hit the traditional route before it disappears completely. I mean, I have a nook – I know that the industry is dragging inexorably toward electronic formats taking the lead. Even so, I’d like to start off where I wanted to start off as a kid.

      • Caitlin Ricci

        May 11, 2012 at 9:24 PM

        Which I completely respect and I love my beautiful Black Beauty first edition so I get that. But… Silver does release in print as well so it’s something to consider for the future if you’re still looking.


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